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Hi, Gabi! I'm a professional poet and editor (with some experience with branching narrative tools like Twine and Miro) currently studying game writing and narrative design at ELVTR. I'm really interested in contributing to games as a writer, and I'd love to talk further. My professional discord is ennislmsw. Looking forward to hopefully connecting with you! 

i thought this was very atmospheric and well-designed!! i loved the different things you did with the visuals of the text. 

i thought this was a really creative way to use Twine!! 

this was really lovely! a fun twist on the fairytale

I really liked the mechanic of exploring the different areas to find information that would help unlock the correct test answers! 

hey, just wanted to check if the text is AI generated/AI-edited?

absolutely beautiful art, so excited to play this. i am looking Respectfully at Vicente

thanks, i also liked the strong sense of place! i think twine lends itself really well to that kind of spatial organization! 

this was really unique and poetic!!! and i liked the aesthetic

this was really cute!! i liked the different options of exploring the party at the beginning. cheese boards <3

i'm using this in a project i'm working on for gamedev class!! love this art style <3

i hope you put out an epilepsy safe version, he looks so cute but i'm trying to stay out of the hospital ahaha <3

omg is this based on mass effect? i loveee mass effect

hello!! is there a plain text version of this game? it looks cool as hell but also i am dyslexic <3

I'd really love to get this, but it doesn't look like it's ever coming out :( i hope it's released someday!! 

slop

hey, this is just to say it seems like there's something wrong with your mic in this video? some mouth sounds/consonant noises are weirdly loud. could be a settings issue 

oh he's ADORABLE

What's the best way to contact an administrator or manager? This is unacceptable behavior from a public company. Un-American.

I've noticed that some of my purchases, as well as some of the creator pages I've purchased from, are MISSING. Is this the work of hackers? As someone who works hard for a living and has a real job (not theft, hacking, or scams) I know the value of my American dollars. I'm very concerned that hackers might have access to my payment information. I think as real Itch.Io users we should all band together and demand answers NOW. 

i can't find it

this is just to say that i love the vibes of this game and would be really interested in designing third-party stuff for it (tokyo mew mew was my favorite in middle school) and would love to grab a community copy when more are available!! 

downloaded this THREE YEARS AGO, read it, decided it was the coolest game i had ever seen, started telling all my friends about it... and then completely forgot what it was called. i now have found it again by sorting all my PDFs by size, but it's been so long that all my friends are 100% convinced that this is not a real game and it's something I saw in a dream. which feels lore compliant. anyway this is the coolest game ever, criminally underhyped, doing things that no other game is doing, weird as hell (positive) and generally what Invisible Sun wishes it was. i'm so normal about this game you have no idea 

i love the vibes this game has. the vibes are VIBING.

the cover says "player v dect vs deck game" btw 

Hello! This looks amazing- do you have any plans to release more community copies?

i loved this and i'm going to tell all my friends about it <3

i see "sopping wet man," i download immediately

neat concept!

oof... relatable.

"i will do my best even if my best is the worst" hell yeah good vibes 

I love this cover!! Did you design it?

I thought the writing was great! Really relatable. I wish there was an option to choose a more accessible font and/or turn off the moving text effects, though. 

I thought this was a well-written game. The descriptions really gave a sense of what the setting was like. I wonder how unlocking the other endings works?

I really like the aesthetic, the text was really relatable... couldn't figure out how the controls worked though, are you supposed to drag the lil star or use the arrow keys or click on where you want to go?

i was like "damn this is going to be funny" and it was

thank you so much!!!

anyway if you like this and have time/spoons to leave a review, or if you want to see more books set in the same world, i'd be so excited if you could let me know!